"I like the image you've chosen to use as its very interesting and sums up the content of your film well, however, it doesn't show that you will change the light into a shape. To improve it you could put the text into collumns, like they do in real magazine reviews, and put an image of a shaped bokeh." - Hannah Emery, 17
"The font used looks quite boring. I know its more sophisticated than other film magazines, but I think it needs to look more fun. I wanna look at the page and be interest, not put off by office fonts. Maybe change the font to the same font used in the poster and film?" - Abi Jones, 17
From this feedback, Miranda decided to change the image to a still from the film- showing the audience what techniques have been used. We wanted to show the complexity of our film and the skill involved. Abi mentioned that the font looked too formal, considering our film is quirky, and so Miranda changed this to the font we have used in both our film and the poster. Giving all of the pieces the same house-style will make them more recognisable as a pair.
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