Blur first draft

Below is the first draft of our film- Blur



Miranda and I both felt as though we needed to inject some more colour into our final piece.

Having recently found this video on YouTube-



The colours used in First Bokeh Film use vibrant saturated colours. Unlike our film, the light have not been blurred into shapes, however the colours alone make it captivating and engaging for the audience. when editing our film I am going to experiment with the saturation and brightness to create something just as bright.
The music in this piece is simple and calming, which fits the flow of the lights perfectly. The music used in our first draft is very competitive. From our feedback the audience didn't like the repetitive music.  This is another one of the elements we need to work on.